Digte:

 

[Blackstone]

Det lyder godt, men det er svært, da det/de(digte)ikke sælger så meget og jeg venter på svar fra et og de vil nok først udgive til 2012, hvis at de vil, men jeg venter(jeg har fået den udgivet gennem et forlag fra USA og har solgt ca. 20 eksemplarer) og har også en masse projekter i gang og jeg skal ha fortalt (om) min historie bla. gennem digte... men held og lykke med dine projekter...

Vh.Blackstone

[SimonHO]

Hvad synes du om mit Blackstone?

[Blackstone]

Grinern nok , men ikke så seriøst desværre, men sjovt nok...

Vh.Blackstone

[bibo123]

1, 2, 3
Vi har det sjooov
4, 5, 6
Vi har det sjooov
8, 9, 10
Vi har det sjooov
Hov, vi glemte 7. Men hvad gør det? Så længe vi har det sjooov

den sagde de også på min efterskole mega underligt

[Blackstone]

Hey alle.
Her kommer et forholdsvist nyt digt.
Jeg håber i kan li det:

Jeg sidder og venter, men ved ikke på hvad
mens tiden går og livet passere forbi
med et håb om at finde (en)mening
Spilder jeg mit liv(?)
Bedrøvelsen som et stof der/som bliver størrere og størrere
venter på forelskelsen og den eneste ene
men hved ikke hvornår?
Jeg bliver ældre og ældre, men stadig den samme!
Smerten som sidder som inspirationskilde
føles kun som om at jeg lever, når at jeg føler glæde eller smerte/sorg
I det mindste lever jeg
(når at jeg føler ellers som en levende død)

Vh.Blackstone

[Hawkins]

Puha jeg har da også en 6 digte fra da jeg var en lille purk, dem kan jeg da godt lige copy/paste hertil... Nogle af dem er måske infantile og sukkersøde til en grad der kræver en brækspand, men så skip hurtigt over den og få appetiten igen .


You’re my one and only
The only thing I’ve ever dreamed of
Every day, when I get lonely
I think of you and me
And how it would be

I lay awake at night
Thinking about you
I wish you were in my sight
So I could pull you near
And whisper in your ear…

I wish I could just hold you tight
Tell you how much I love you
Both day and night
And when it’s going to be
You’ll be the only thing I see

You haunt my dreams
I wish you would do some more
It’s so seldom, it seems
It should be both day and night
You’re my star so bright

I love you, now and forever
You’re the only girl I’ve ever wanted
I want us always to be together
For the rest of my life
I want you someday, to be my wife



We met one night
It was a night in June
You were all in my sight
I hoped I’d see you soon

But a long time gone past
My love for you grew strong
One day, I saw you at last
The time didn’t seem long

But you made up my mind
I wanted to be with you
You are so sweet, funny and kind
And very beautiful too

I gave it all up
All I wanted was you
My love for you won’t stop
And I know you love me too

We’ll never be lonely
‘Cause now we’re together
You’re my one and only
For now and forever



I don’t know what to do without you
I’ll always be happy
As long as you love me too

I’ve often dreamt that you’d leave me
But when I wake up, when I think of you,
you assure me, that it’ll never be.

When you come back,
even though you’ve been away for long,
our love would never lack.

With you I’ll grow old
Because with me you’ll always be
I believe every word you’ve had me told

When ever you feel lonely
Just look deep within your heart
And you’ll know, that we’ll never part

You are the most perfect among girls
When ever you smile at me
Your eyes light up as pearls

And I’ll know you’re the one
When I’m with you
You outshine the sun

I øvrigt pudsigt at jeg kaldte det digt "Short One"



I know we will be apart for long
That’s why I wrote this song
I wanted you to know
I’ll stick with you
In rain, sun and snow
And even though it seems forever
I’ll wait for you too

Even though I miss you so
We’ll always be together I know
I wait for the day
When you’ll come back
So you can hear me say
My love for you will be forever
My love for you will never lack

You’ve cried for me
I wish this would never be
I’ve also cried for you
Even though I try not to be sad
Just being with you is good too
But I feel it's my fault you want back
It makes me feel so bad…


Drifting apart

I feel this every day.
It seems like it won’t go away-
Seems like we’re drifting apart
I’ve tried so hard to make it right
at keeping it going
without a fight

When we get the chance and you call
it seems our time is small.
Seems like we’re drifting apart.
In every word we say
it just won’t go away
not even for a day

But I will still love you now
for all time, I’ve made that vow
even though we’re drifting apart
And when you get back
my love will not lack
not for a single day



I feel this every day.
It seems like it won’t go away-
Seems like we’re drifting apart
I’ve tried so hard to make it right
at keeping it going
without a fight

When we get the chance and you call
it seems our time is small.
Seems like we’re drifting apart.
In every word we say
it just won’t go away
not even for a day

But I will still love you now
for all time, I’ve made that vow
even though we’re drifting apart
And when you get back
my love will not lack
not for a single day

[Blackstone]

Hey Hawk1nz:
Gode digte, men jeg har ikke læst dem alle, men dem jeg har er gode og jeg synes ikke at de er for infatile og sukkersøde, men smukke og oprigtige...

Vh.Blackstone

[Gungner]

Så vil jeg da også lige smide et par stykker af mine hjemmelavede:

"I figured out, what you’re all about
Pain and fear behind your fake tears
Torturing my soul as I lose control
I’m about to give up"

"I’m in a car underwater with time to kill. Thinking back, I forgot to tell you this:
I didn’t care that you left and abandoned me, what hurts more, is that I would still die for you."

"There’s poison in my drinking cup.
Don’t stop.
Just sip it, drink it, wash it down.
And in a swirling masquerade of sounds
My body hits the ground."

[Blackstone]

Utroligt så mange gode digte og så meget talent der er, synes jeg og det er dejligt at det ikke kun er mig, som skriver, selvom at jeg gerne ville ha lidt respons og nok også giver jer andre det på et tidspunkt, hvilket denne tråd også var/er beregnet til og det håber jeg da at folk gør brug af, så det ikke bare bliver digte, men også kritik og respons og noget/lidt fylde, som indeholder andet end bare digte, hvilket også er godt nok, men det er bare min mening jo...

Vh.Blackstone

[Hawkins]

Blackstone: Tak for rosen For lige at svare på dit indlæg, så har du ret i at det er rart at få respons, hvilket du ikke har fået, så here goes:

Jeg kan rigtig godt lide dit digt - Det beskriver meget godt din og sikkert mange andre unges situation efterhånden som man ældes og ser livet passere foran en.. Den slags digte kommer kun når man sidder alene og føler at det eneste man bruger dagene på, er at få tiden til at gå. Jeg har det selv sådan for tiden.. Nu er jeg lige kommet ud af en bunke lange forhold i rap, så det er helt underligt bare at være sig selv og sidde med sine egne tanker uden at have nogen at dele dem med - netop derfor er denne tråd nok rigtig god.
For lige at komme med lidt kritik, så forstyrrer det mig at der er så mange sprog- og stavefejl i dit digt - men det er jo kun fordi jeg er perfektionistisk når det drejer sig om skriftsprog .

[Quixotry]

You were my little innocent pill.
You had an amazing gift – an admirable skill.
A skill to make me feel complete,
You told me, that it isn’t a sin to be weak.
But nobody can or will change my sight at this;
It’s a sin – And if you don’t believe me, I can’t help being rebellious.
(I’m sorry)

First of all I have to admit my mistakes,
No matter what it takes!
I’ve made many, I won’t deny that,
Or else, my conscience will turn bad.

I want to be beautiful and attractive,
Make the guys follow me like they’re addictive.
And deep inside me I know it’s a possibility,
A chance and an opportunity to be free.

So give me my love drug,
Then I might be able to see trough the fog.
‘Cause with the little innocent pill called Ecstasy,
I’ll be the person I want to be.

You were my little innocent pill,
You had an amazing gift – an admirable skill.
A skill to make me feel complete,
You told me, that it isn’t a sin to be weak
But nobody can or will change my sight at this;
It’s a sin – And if you don’t believe me, I can’t help being rebellious.
(I’m sorry)

Now that my ignorance and happiness has disappeared,
I see the scary faces I have feared.
Mummy, I’m scared – they won’t go away,
Now I see the price I have to pay.

I’d spoken words I never thought would cross my lips,
Would you please alleviate my guilt – it might drown the eclipse.
I wish it was an option – but I’m unchangeable.
That’s how God made me - and if you try to change that – you’d be unforgivable!

My shell is tough – almost unbreakable.
But my interior is vulnerable.
A kiss and I’ll surrender – waiting, to be left in the pouring rain.
Please - stab my back, and free me from this pain.

Why didn’t you do it? You were so close!
You didn’t have the guts, I suppose.
I saw your shadow – you shivered like hell,
I guess you never wanted to watch me fell.
(But someday you have to – I’m sorry)

[Tumle3175]

Det må jeg sige.. Super stor cadou til alle jer "digt-skrivere".
Jeg skriver ikke selv digte, men kunne godt tænke mig at prøve.
Men hvordan får jeg den bedste kvalitet, til mine digte?
Altså, mener jeg, ex. med 5 ord på hver linje eller 5 linjer i hvert vers?
skal det rime ? osv.

[Gungner]

Det må jeg sige.. Super stor cadou til alle jer "digt-skrivere".
Jeg skriver ikke selv digte, men kunne godt tænke mig at prøve.
Men hvordan får jeg den bedste kvalitet, til mine digte?
Altså, mener jeg, ex. med 5 ord på hver linje eller 5 linjer i hvert vers?
skal det rime ? osv.

Digte er meget individuelt... Alle digtere skriver forskelligt, så der er ingen "opskrift" at følge.
Du skriver bare det du synes, Nogle digte rimer, andre gør ikke. Nogle digte består af to linier, mens andre
ligner en roman. Så igen, det er meget individuelt

[Tumle3175]

okay tak. (:

[Hawkins]

Det kommer helt an på hvilken stil du vælger. Der skal som regel være en vis rytme i et digt - om det rimer eller ej er sådanset ligegyldigt og helt afhængig af hvilken stil du selv vælger. Hvis du virkelig går op i det, så kan du opdele digtet alt efter hvordan meningen skal være.. Det vigtigste er at du får den mening ud som du gerne vil have det.